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    First commentary! Whooooooo

    It's here guys Please enjoy and give me some feedback if you can be bothered!

    Like, comment or subscribe if you enjoyed it people. Not perfect I know, i'm also very tired in it, the next few I upload WILL get much more exciting!

    (29-3)

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TPCr29Vo798&feature=plcp
    Last edited by DREAM_USER; 06-17-2012 at 04:09 PM.
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    Re: First commentary! Whooooooo

    Don't do it when your tired next time silly! I did that a couple of times and I always screw up!

    Try to come into the video with a couple of topics, may like 1 or 2 things you want to say. Try to not talk about the video much. Give a rundown of the loadout at first and then talk about your topics. What I had to learn is the people are watching the gameplay, thus they don't need you to tell them what's happening.

    Great first commentary! Looking forward to more in the future!

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    Re: First commentary! Whooooooo

    Quote Originally Posted by crappppy View Post
    Don't do it when your tired next time silly! I did that a couple of times and I always screw up!

    Try to come into the video with a couple of topics, may like 1 or 2 things you want to say. Try to not talk about the video much. Give a rundown of the loadout at first and then talk about your topics. What I had to learn is the people are watching the gameplay, thus they don't need you to tell them what's happening.

    Great first commentary! Looking forward to more in the future!
    Thanks alot mate for the feedback, next time (will probably do it tonight) I will be way more hyped and might write down a couple of bullet points to keep my on track.
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    Re: First commentary! Whooooooo

    Quote Originally Posted by DREAM_USER View Post
    Thanks alot mate for the feedback, next time (will probably do it tonight) I will be way more hyped and might write down a couple of bullet points to keep my on track.
    Yay! Can't wait to see it! Never give up! You can only improve!

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    Re: First commentary! Whooooooo

    Quote Originally Posted by crappppy View Post
    What I had to learn is the people are watching the gameplay, thus they don't need you to tell them what's happening.

    this is 10 characters
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    Re: First commentary! Whooooooo

    Quote Originally Posted by MorninAfterKill View Post
    this is 10 characters
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    Re: First commentary! Whooooooo

    Hehe GCI just tweeted advertising my commentary ^_^
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    Re: First commentary! Whooooooo

    I'd try and cut the intro down to 10 seconds because it is too long.

    Not bad for a first commentary. Should be nice once you get a focus point for your commentaries.

    Try not to talk about other videos you plan on making. We'll see them once they go up.

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    Re: First commentary! Whooooooo

    Quote Originally Posted by DREAM_USER View Post
    Hehe GCI just tweeted advertising my commentary ^_^
    Lucky you ;D I can't wait until I figure out how to fix my USB capture stuff. I'll be making commentaries straight away Also, congratulations on 100 views

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